This is not a good idea but...

Nomadpl13 · 06-10-2004, 08:54 PM

While i posted a song before and got flamed, badly, i am going to try again. but with the following caveats:

1) the vocals dominate both songs sry, thats a mixing problem.
2) The guitars are really repetative, and i know its a totaly diss to my musicianship, so only say somthing about it if u think it activly hurts the song.

www.purevolume.com/industrialaccident

marcusthecat · 06-10-2004, 09:34 PM

It's great except for the mixing problem. fix it and it would be a great song!

06-11-2004, 05:57 AM

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah ahhahahahahahahahahahahahahh thats a good one!

sliver · 06-11-2004, 11:52 AM

sorry, horrible... and not just because of the "mixing", the singer is really out of key all the time, he needs a lot of practise. consider lessons.

Nomadpl13 · 06-11-2004, 12:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by theabstract

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah ahhahahahahahahahahahahahahh thats a good one!

hahaha meaning "hahaha thats good and funny", or "hahaha, u call that a song?"

4 string giant · 06-11-2004, 02:25 PM

i have mixed feelings. part of me wants to finish this post, part of me wants to write something meaningful, and the other part of me is hungry.

im going to the 76.

Lydisk · 06-11-2004, 02:33 PM

is this some kind of joke?

4 string giant · 06-11-2004, 02:34 PM

me? or the song?

Lydisk · 06-11-2004, 02:37 PM

uh mostly the song but... ya... both

4 string giant · 06-11-2004, 02:39 PM

oh. yes it is! and its a clever one too!

Yurmasyurda · 06-11-2004, 08:02 PM

Hi Nomad. I've had a listen to both your songs, it sounds like you're having fun more so than trying to get the songs right. This in itself ain't too bad if all you wanna do is mess around. They need some work. I'm no expert but there are plenty on here that will point you in the right direction.

Yurma

Daniel KVX10 Rodrigues · 06-14-2004, 04:39 AM

Wonder Thunder looks like those songs u see on Jackie Chan movies when he enters an olf fashioned club... is this jazz??

fenwood · 06-14-2004, 06:40 AM

You epitomize everything that is wrong with freedom.

punkskametalman · 08-15-2004, 09:23 PM

drums - sorry. terrible.
vocals - sorry again. terrible.
bass and guitar - the talent is definitely there. consider a new drummer and singer. i know you can do much better than what i hear in those two songs.

08-15-2004, 11:29 PM

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH. Lol. Thats a funny song. Is it supposed to be funny?

GuitarComet · 08-16-2004, 12:16 AM

Usually, if the song is that bad, no one says anything.
I wonder what happened to that "self-control" on this thread?

~~dongingtonrocker~~ · 08-16-2004, 01:38 AM

Wonder Thunder Song-

Slows down way too much, and vocals are off key numerous times. Add reverb to the vocals. Reverb can make anything sound good. Try getting a pop filter for the mic and that would help the p's and b's. Drummer gets off tempo alot. Thats all I can think of.

GimmeSlack12 · 08-16-2004, 01:39 AM

Quite honestly, this is sh!t. Honestly man, lessons won't make this any better. Singing is not that hard, and more and more I'm understanding that some folks are better off just jammin on guitar, or just LISTENING to music. This kid sings like a .... ok, you get the idea. I think I'll leave the real flaming to Fenwood.

rhonda · 08-16-2004, 05:16 AM

haha.. "we wanna get in your pants".... genious!

Jon_mase · 08-16-2004, 06:56 AM

get a good singer, the rest will do , but the singer is out of TUNNNEEEE. ure all probably afraid of singing (the musicians, not ure singer) so u got this guy in , and hes crap.

06-10-2004, 08:54 PM	#1
Nomadpl13 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 46	This is not a good idea but... While i posted a song before and got flamed, badly, i am going to try again. but with the following caveats: 1) the vocals dominate both songs sry, thats a mixing problem. 2) The guitars are really repetative, and i know its a totaly diss to my musicianship, so only say somthing about it if u think it activly hurts the song. www.purevolume.com/industrialaccident

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06-10-2004, 09:34 PM	#2
marcusthecat :.:.:.:.:.:. Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: the burning hell of Texas Posts: 382	It's great except for the mixing problem. fix it and it would be a great song!

06-11-2004, 05:57 AM	#3
theabstract Guest Posts: n/a	hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah ahhahahahahahahahahahahahahh thats a good one!

06-11-2004, 11:52 AM	#4
sliver darth sliver Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: toronto, ontario Posts: 4,278	sorry, horrible... and not just because of the "mixing", the singer is really out of key all the time, he needs a lot of practise. consider lessons.

06-11-2004, 02:25 PM	#6
4 string giant came to snuff the rooster Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: reno nevada Posts: 273	i have mixed feelings. part of me wants to finish this post, part of me wants to write something meaningful, and the other part of me is hungry. im going to the 76.

06-11-2004, 02:33 PM	#7
Lydisk Roskilde '07 Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Naked City Posts: 9,429	is this some kind of joke?

06-11-2004, 02:34 PM	#8
4 string giant came to snuff the rooster Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: reno nevada Posts: 273	me? or the song?

06-11-2004, 02:37 PM	#9
Lydisk Roskilde '07 Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Naked City Posts: 9,429	uh mostly the song but... ya... both

06-11-2004, 02:39 PM	#10
4 string giant came to snuff the rooster Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: reno nevada Posts: 273	oh. yes it is! and its a clever one too!

06-11-2004, 08:02 PM	#11
Yurmasyurda Registered User Join Date: Sep 2001 Posts: 109	Hi Nomad. I've had a listen to both your songs, it sounds like you're having fun more so than trying to get the songs right. This in itself ain't too bad if all you wanna do is mess around. They need some work. I'm no expert but there are plenty on here that will point you in the right direction. Yurma

06-14-2004, 04:39 AM	#12
Daniel KVX10 Rodrigues Jani Liimatainen = GOD! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Portugal-----Lisbon Posts: 1,023	Wonder Thunder looks like those songs u see on Jackie Chan movies when he enters an olf fashioned club... is this jazz??

06-14-2004, 06:40 AM	#13
fenwood People b4 Profits Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 1,454	You epitomize everything that is wrong with freedom.

08-15-2004, 09:23 PM	#14
punkskametalman Too Drunk To **** Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: DIRTY JERSEY REPRESENT Posts: 300	drums - sorry. terrible. vocals - sorry again. terrible. bass and guitar - the talent is definitely there. consider a new drummer and singer. i know you can do much better than what i hear in those two songs.

08-15-2004, 11:29 PM	#15
spliggity splot Guest Posts: n/a	HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH. Lol. Thats a funny song. Is it supposed to be funny?

08-16-2004, 12:16 AM	#16
GuitarComet Why Am I Here? Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Eastern, N.C. USA Posts: 482	Usually, if the song is that bad, no one says anything. I wonder what happened to that "self-control" on this thread?

08-16-2004, 01:38 AM	#17
~~dongingtonrocker~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 188	Wonder Thunder Song- Slows down way too much, and vocals are off key numerous times. Add reverb to the vocals. Reverb can make anything sound good. Try getting a pop filter for the mic and that would help the p's and b's. Drummer gets off tempo alot. Thats all I can think of.

08-16-2004, 01:39 AM	#18
GimmeSlack12 Reckless witha Flyswatter Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 1,061	Quite honestly, this is sh!t. Honestly man, lessons won't make this any better. Singing is not that hard, and more and more I'm understanding that some folks are better off just jammin on guitar, or just LISTENING to music. This kid sings like a .... ok, you get the idea. I think I'll leave the real flaming to Fenwood.

08-16-2004, 05:16 AM	#19
rhonda Registered User Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 10	haha.. "we wanna get in your pants".... genious!

08-16-2004, 06:56 AM	#20
Jon_mase Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 40	get a good singer, the rest will do , but the singer is out of TUNNNEEEE. ure all probably afraid of singing (the musicians, not ure singer) so u got this guy in , and hes crap.